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My Friend, Stephanie Moore

The children’s writing community is pretty cool. There are a lot of good people here. WIFYR has helped me socialize. (Yup. I’m not very good at that.)  And I can’t believe it’s been 18 years. My youngest was two. And still nursing. The reason I’m telling you this because I want to tell you about somebody who stepped up a few years ago when my assistant at WIFYR had to cancel because of health issues. Stephanie Moore took over my class for that assistant. She organized, emailed, contacted me, contacted the class, checked in, asked how she could help. And it may have been her very first year at the conference.

Stephanie very quickly became my right hand gal. That hasn’t changed. She’s an amazing woman. The two of us work very differently (and that means sometimes there is a butting of heads) (but that also means that there is an amazing product at the end). Together, we’re sort of a whole person. I love and adore Stephanie. (Just an FYI, she won  second place in the Utah Arts Original Writing Competition with her YA. Woot woot!) She has an incredible laugh. She shares my awkward sense of humor. She is a dedicated writer, a dedicated friend, and a dedicated Mom.

Day before yesterday, Stephanie’s daughter died. It was unexpected and, as you can imagine, horrifying to anyone who knew Rory and anyone who loves Stephanie. I’ve been crying since I found out. I don’t know why terrible, crummy, crappy things happen to good people but I will tell you this: the dedication Stephanie showed in helping me run an amazing conference is nothing like the dedication she has for her children and her husband. She is a perfectionist at many things. This includes sharing her love.

I cannot imagine how she must be suffering. And I wish I could take that pain away. There are no words I can offer my friend. But I can ask this incredible writing community to please pray for Stephanie and Lance and their three boys. Their lives will never be the same again. And the only chance for peace for them now will have to come from our God.

 

PS Dear Becca Birkin reminded me there is a gofundme for Rory’s funeral expenses.

https://www.gofundme.com/6c3ja5nk

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NaNoWriMo, Lemon Trees and Blossoms

A few weeks ago my youngest and I transplanted my lemon tree into a new pot. Every year we get one HUGE lemon from this tree and I was excited that the one lemon I had-pollinated, still clung to the branch.

Low and behold, when Carolina and I moved our tree, it rejoiced and burst out in blossoms all over!

Yahoo! More hand-pollination for me to do! The promise of more lemons!

But this growth got me to thinking. I take very good care of my southern plants. I have two orange trees, a clementine, a lime and two lemons. I have a couple of hibiscus and I’m even growing ginger (three pots full). Still, my lemon needed more love than I had given it. It needed room to breathe and stretch. And when I gave the tree what it needed, I was rewarded with blossoms.

This is sorta like our stories. Here we are, writing with our heads down, trying to get a specific number of words each day. This is exactly what we should do during NaNoWriMo. And at this point, we should be in the just-after-the-beginning of the middle of our novels. That  horrible awful icky yucky-ducky place that I slog through every time I write a book. We might be feeling a little stuck. Or root-bound.

Why not shake things up a little? Loosen the roots of your book. Allow your story to blossom. How? By asking yourself a few questions. Here are a few that may shake things up for you.

  • Am I allowing my character to move the plot or an I forcing the story to go the way I want it to?
  • Am I adding far too many characters? Too many subplots? Too many useless words just to make word count?
  • Am I feeling a forward movement in the story or have I gotten stuck because of wrong moves made in previous pages?
  • Do I trust myself, my story idea, my creativity, my characters to move the story toward the climax of the novel?
  • Do I know where I am headed? (By now, I think you should know what the climax of the story will be.)
  • For the sake of numbers, am I adding useless bits and pieces that may throw me off course during revision?

Hopefully these questions will give you an idea of how to grow a bit more during this exciting month of NaNoWriMo. And I mean that. This month should be a growing month, an exciting month, a frustrating-but-I-did-it, fun month!

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Lynne Snyder

Last week, my dear friend Lynne Snyder died.

When my daughter approached me, her face had this look like–how do I tell Mom? I knew another person had died. But Lynne? She was just diagnosed with leukemia.  How could this be?

Don’t think you know Lynne? She’s the person who commented so often here on the blog. Always words of encouragement. Man, am I going to miss seeing what she thinks of what Ann Dee or Kyra or I have written.

I love Lynne and I will miss her. She was funny, extremely kind, and man, had she hoed the road. I remember she told me she walked around for a week–in agony–having no idea she had a broken leg (had she broken her femur?). Her writing was incredible. I met her years ago when someone trashed her work–along with the work of many other writers–and she was determined to never write a gain. Then I read her stories. I was blown away. So much talent. She painted (watercolor) and made caramels that would make you cry, they were so good. But what she did best was love people. All people. No matter who they were or what they did. She opened her arms to the world. Lucky for me, I made it into those arms.

I asked a dear friend, DeAnn Campbell to say a few things about Lynne. Here is her tribute.

Years ago, when I lived in Utah, Carol Lynch Williams introduced me to Lynne Snyder. “You should be in a writing group together,” she told us. And so we were. Our small group of three and sometimes four met weekly. We wrote, we critiqued, but we also loved and laughed and cried and shared each other’s lives. I once heard an author say that all writing in its heart is about loss. Now we’ve lost our beloved Lynne Snyder.

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Preparing for NaNoWriMo

On Thursday I wrote a long list of things we could do to prepare for NaNoWriMo and for some reason, when I went to post, it wouldn’t.

I pitched a fit and stomped off.

Went to the TH evening party and it was a lot of fun.

Never resent.

You have today and tomorrow to think about a few questions so you can jump into NaNo a little more prepared.

BTW, if you want to play with WIFYR, email Bruce here: wifyrdoesnano@gmail.com and make your goals. Bruce will add you to the list. The goal is 1,000,000 words as a group! Woot woot!

Novel questions:

  1. Who is your main character?
  2. What does she want?
  3. Have her write a note to you.
  4. Ask her 25 personal questions and write this interview down.
  5. Who are her friends?
  6. Her enemies?
  7. Her family?
  8. What is she afraid of?
  9. Can she sing?
  10. Dance?
  11. Is she funny?
  12. Snarky?
  13. Does he have a crush?
  14. A true love?
  15. What is the scariest thing that can happen to her?
  16. Will it happen to her?
  17. What do you see as the climax of the story? Do you have a general idea?
  18.  Name three things she will lose during the telling of the story.
  19. Are you trying to teach a lesson?
  20. What are you willing to give up to complete your 50,000 words?

Also, every Thursday evening, from 7-10 pm we will meet at Kyra Leigh’s house, eat and write.

Last year this was a lot of fun. This year it will be even more fun because I won’t have to clean every TH in anticipation of people arriving at my home. YAHOO, KYRA LEIGH! Anyway, if you want to bring potluck (which is what gets you into the house) and write for a few hours with fellow NaNoers, let me know. We have room for about 15 people.

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Monday Reminder: Writing Challenge Potluck!

When? October 26, 2017

Where? Kyra Leigh’s place

Email me at carolthewriter@yahoo.com for the address!

Time? 7:00 pm -9:30 pm THIS IS A TIME CHANGE!!! PLEASE NOTE.

Who? Anyone who participated in our month-long writing challenge. Please come even if you didn’t complete all your goals.

What? Bring 200 words to read from your WIP and something to edible to share.

If your last name starts with:

A-H bring an appetizer for 6

I-P bring a main dish for 6

O-Z bring a dessert for 6

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Upcoming Events! Mark Your Calendars!

Potluck Writer’s Dinner October 26, 2017

When? October 26, 2017

Where? Kyra Leigh’s place

Email me at carolthewriter@yahoo.com for the address!

Time? 6 pm -9 pm

Who? Anyone who participated in our month-long writing challenge. Please come even if you didn’t complete all your goals.

What? Bring 200 words to read from your WIP and something to edible to share.

If your last name starts with:

A-H bring an appetizer for 6

I-P bring a main dish for 6

O-Z bring a dessert for 6

 

Writing for Charity

When? November 4, 2017

Where? Utah Valley University

What? ALL proceeds go to KIDS CAUSE of Utah

Who? All writers, all stages of the writing life

Time? 9-5

for more information and to register go to WritingForCharity.org

 

WIFYR and NaNoWriMo Writing Together

When? Every Thursday evening EVEN Thanksgiving.

HA! Kidding!

Where? Kyra Leigh’s place (Email me for address. See above)

What? Come and write for three hours every Thursday evening and enjoy a potluck feast.

Who? The first 16 people who sign up

Time? 6 pm – 9 pm

 

2018 WIFYR and SCBWI New Year Writer’s Kickoff

When? January 18, 2018

Where? Provo Public Library, The Young Room

What? A speaker (TBA), Food (Potluck–see the food theme?), writing contests, prizes and more fun than a cold January Thursday evening should be

Who? Anyone and Everyone!

Time? 6-8 pm

 

Third Annual February Agent/Editor Retreat

When? February 28, 2018 FREE Event

March 1-3

(You choose one of these three days to attend–prices forthcoming)

Where? Brigham Young University (speech)

Cheri Pray Earl’s house (day-long retreat)

What? Classes on craft, one-on-one with a New York agent or editor, writing, fraternizing, fun

Who? Limited number of attendees each day

Time? 9 am -5: 30 pm

 

Writing and Illustrating for Young Readers 2018

When? June 11-15, 2018

Where? The Waterford School in Sandy, UT

What? A week-long, writing intensive event

Who? All levels of writers. Classes for beginning writers to  full novel critiques by an editor. More information to come

Time? 8:30 am-6 pm, daily

Faculty? Heather Flaherty from The Bent Agency

Alyson Heller, Simon and Schuster editor

Jennifer Adams, Sounds True editor

Heidi Taylor, editor at Shadow Mountain, The Full Novel class

Claudia Mills, author, Getting Ready for the Full Novel class

J Scott Savage, author, The Boot Camp class

Courtney Alameda, author, Advanced class

Trent Reedy,  author, Writing the Novel class

Stephanie Black, author, Writing the Novel class

Sharlee Glenn, author, Writing the Picture Book class

Christian Heidicker, author, Three-Day class

Heather B Moore, author/editor, Two-Day class

 

 

 

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Three Thing Thursday

1.

Write down ALL the ideas you have for books on 3X5 cards (or full sheets of paper). Hang them ALL where you can see them often. As you work on your current project, can you look up and see your 57 terrific ideas? If not, make it so.

 

2.

I love this quote by Robert Frost. “No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader.”

 

3.

We have our WIFYR faculty! Mark your calendar for June 11-15, 2018

Heather Flaherty (agent)

Alyson Heller (editor)

Jennifer Adams (editor)

Sharlee Glenn (picture book)

Courtney Alameda (advanced)

Trent Reedy (general)

Heidi Taylor (full novel)

J. Scott Savage (boot camp)

Claudia Mills (getting ready for the full novel)

Stephanie Black (general)

Christian Heidicker (three day)

Heather B Moore (two day)

 

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